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Have you ever heard the saying “You are what you eat”? Well, it it is true. And most school lunches are unhealthy. Including Grant school’s. What I am trying to say is that Grant school’s food needs to be healthier.

Grant school’s food needs to be healthier because it’s currently is unhealthy. I know you might not care, but I do. Lola and I got sick, just for that one reason. Katie complained about it, and she eats cafeteria lunch a lot. She is my best friend! She means so much to me.

Also, Grant school’s food needs to be healthier because kids could get diabetes. You probably care, but in case you don’t listen to this. You feel really bad with diabetes! There is no cure, and you still have to pay for expensive medications.

You might be wondering how Grant will get the money, but it can be easy. We can simply replace the unhealthy food with healthy food!! Such as fruit soaked in fruit juice, instead of high fructose corn syrup, we can also get cage-free eggs! We can get organic and fresh fruits and vegetables. We can sell the unhealthy food to get money for the healthy food. If you’re still worried that we don’t have enough money, we can have more book fairs, fundraisers, and we could sell some electronics. I think we have enough. We could also have more hoedowns! I hope you help the community, even though a child wrote this.

I think that it is really important to make Grant school’s food healthier. Please donate to make our school’s food healthier so that less kids will get sick. I hope you now care about my opinion and you will help with it!

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