Peer comments

By Ethan Cain, Nicolas Oster, Jackson Miller.  

Peer comments can help you because the peer can help you see what they see and think what they think and tell you your simple mistakes.

But it can also be bad because the peer could give you bad feedback or none at all, or make you get rid of a lot of the hard work you did or really good parts of the story.

1. Add in transitioning words

2. Make sure you have dialogue

3. Add different dialogue tags

4. Add descriptive details

5. Have a climax

6. Have a conflict, internal and external

7.  Add in a vivid setting

8. Add all the stages of plot

9. Have multiple characters

10. Underline 1-4

Final product

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2 years ago