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My Feelings Survey

       The three statements I choose are : Being loyal to your family is important , Laws of god(s)/tradition are more important than laws made by a government and Power corrupts those who have it .

        First statement is about loyalty , I strongly agree that everyone must be loyal to his or her family  because our family is all we have on earth and that every body can deny you but not your family . For examples : A family where they help each other and A family where there is no hatred .

         My second statement is about law , I disagree that laws of god(s)/tradition are more important than laws made by a government . These gods are minor ones because god is not written with a small "g" . For me , law made by  A government is important because it's by that law that we live . For example When a person follow a law made by a god it will lead him nowhere but if you follow a law made by a government you will be seen as a good person .

            And the last statement is about corruption, I agree that power corrupts those who have it because when someone is a leader for example in a company he has some opportunities which he even violate and they even earn more money than he expect . Because of this he or she will want more which will lead to corruption .

               These are the statements I choose to write on which talk about Loyalty , Laws and Corruption .

Comment Stream

2 years ago
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Keyla, good ideas and strong writing! Make sure that you try to find specific examples to support your big ideas.

2 years ago
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Okay Miss Whitcraft . Thank you