White Fang Imagery

Megan Mappin

Also, their effect was irritating, for Cherokee began to growl, very softly, deep down in his throat. There was a correspondence in rhythm between the growls and the movements of the man's hands. The growl rose in the throat with the culmination of each forward-pushing movement, and ebbed down to start up afresh with the movement ending abruptly and the growling rising with a jerk. (Chapter 18)

He snarled softly up at the thing of fear, watching keenly the deportment of the hands. One hand extended outward and began to descend upon his head. His soft snarl grew tense and harsh. The hand continued slowly to descend while he crouched beneath it, eyeing it malignantly, his snarl growing shorter and shorter as, with quickening breath, it approached its culmination. Suddenly he snapped, striking with is fangs like a snake. The hand was jerked back, and the teeth came together emptily with a sharp click. Beauty Smith was frightened and angry. Gray Beaver clouted White Fang alongside the head, so that he cowered down close to earth in respectful obedience.(Chapter 18)

Before he knew what he was doing, he had slashed the intruder twice and sprung clear. Baseek was surprised by the other's temerity and swiftness of attack. He stood gazing stupidly across at White Fang, the raw, red shinbone between them. Baseek was old, and already he had come to know the increasing valor of the dogs it had been his wont to bully. Bitter experiences these, which, perforce, he swallowed, calling upon all his wisdom to cope with them.

On the other hand, try as they would, they couldn't kill White Fang. He was too quick for them, to formidable, too wise. He avoided tight places and always backed out of it when they bade fair surround him. While, as for getting him off his feet, there was no dog among them capable of doing the trick. His feet clung to the earth with the same tenacity that he clung to life. For that matter, life and footing were synonymous in this unending warfare with the pack, and none knew it better than White Fang.

White Fang did not reason it out, did not in his mind make the sharp generalization that the white gods were more powerful. It was a feeling, nothing more, and yet none the less potent. As, in his puppyhood, the looming bulks of the tepees, man-reared, had affected him as the manifestations of power, so was he affected now by the houses and the  and the huge fort all of massive logs. Here was power. Those white gods were strong. They possessed greater mastery over matter than the gods he had known, most powerful among which was Gray Beaver. And yet Gray Beaver was a child-god among these white-skinned ones.

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2 years ago
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You did a really good job because you chose paragraphs in which Jack London showed what he was trying to say instead of just telling (show vs. tell)👍I also used the first one you had about Cherokee. That was a really good example from the book🐶

2 years ago
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1) the first example involves a lot of great samples of imagery. The word choice in that paragraph is phenomenal. such as culmination.

2 years ago
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I think the second passage was a great choice. there are so many great examples. one of my favorites is striking with his fangs like a snake because the simile creates a better image in your head.

2 years ago
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Every single paragraph here shows fantastic uses of imagery. In the first paragraph, there is a vast array of vocabulary such as "correspondence in rhythm". It showed rather then told us the action. I personally enjoyed the second paragraph the best because there was a very extensive amount of imagery shown here. In the third paragraph, I liked how Jack London not only described White Fang but also described Baseek as well. In the fourth instance of imagery, I liked how it somewhat told the reader a moral or lesson through imagery. Finally, in the fifth paragraph, I saw that the author used very different terms to describe the Native Americans. Overall, the paragraphs that you chose showed imagery in a phenomenal way.

2 years ago
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The third passage really showed how strong and violent White Fang was becoming which was vital to the rest of the story.

2 years ago
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in the fourth passage, i am not sure i would've bolded the word capable because I'm not sure how that shows imagery.

2 years ago
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i like the last passage because it really explains the people that White Fang was growing up with which i think is important to the story.