white fang imagery

He knew only how to fight and fight them he did, returning to them a hundredfold the snap sand slashes they had given him in the days when lip-lip was leader of the pack.(chapter 13)

They were soft and helpless, made much noise, and floundered around clumsily, trying  to accomplish by main strength what he accomplished by dexterity  and cunning. They rushed bellowing at him. he sprang to the side. They did not know what had become of him; and in that moment he struck them on their shoulder, rolling them off their feet and delivering his stroke at their shoulder. (chapter 15)

He was kept chained in a pen at the rear of the fort, and here Beauty Smith teased and irritated and drove wild with petty torments. The man early discovered White Fangs susceptibility to laughter, and made it a point, after painfully tricking him, to laugh at him. This laughter was uproarious and scornful, and at the same time the god pointed his finger derisively at White Fang. (chapter 17)

There was wailing in the village, where the woman and children went without in order that what little they had might go into the bellies of the lean and hollow-eyed hunters who trod the forest in the vain pursuit of meat. To such extremity were the gods driven  that they ate the soft-tanned leather of their moccasins and mittens, while the dogs ate the harnesses off their backs and the very whip-lashes. (chapter 14)

Sometimes, when a soft Southland dog went down, shrieking its death cry under the fangs of the pack, this man would be unable to contain himself, and would leap into the air and cry out with delight. And always he had a sharp and covetous eye for white fang. (chapter 13)

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2 years ago
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Overall, I think that your tackk was good.

2 years ago
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1. I think that your first paragraph could have been longer, but I liked the photo that you added to it because it was very appropriate for the imagery example.
2. I thought that your second paragraph was one of your best ones. I think this because it had a lot of imagery as well as strong words. Again, I also enjoyed the picture that you incorporated with that certain example.
3. on your third example I believe that you had a great example of imagery because it was talking about how Beauty Smith was tormenting and bullying White Fang in the beginning of the Chapter.

2 years ago
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4. I thought that your 4th one was one that I thought had great imagery and it also described the scene and setting in a very mature way! I also liked the picture of the wolf that you posted along with it.

2 years ago
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5. I really liked your last one because it seemed to me that it kind of wrapped up your whole tackk. The picture fit right into the example as well.

2 years ago
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1. It showed a little bit of imagery, but I think you could've chose another one that showed a lot more imagery. This paragraph does describe the picture you chose though.
2. I love this paragraph because of the great use of adjectives and adverbs. They really described the fight. Good Job! :)

2 years ago
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2 years ago
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I think your paragraphs were great and descriptive and your pictures corresponded well with your paragraphs. The author described the events you chose extremely well, so I think you picked the perfect paragraphs for these imagery examples.

2 years ago
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Also, you forgot to bold the imagery examples :) So I'm haha just reminding you ;)