The sun will come out tomorrow!

The characters in my book are Annie, her foster family, and Will. In my book Annie it takes place all around Manhatten but especially at her foster home. The problem is that Annie doesn't have any parents and her foster mom is not very nice. To under stand this book you should know that Annie is a very creative person and she is a foster.   

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3 years ago

This is a good basic response, J. It would be great if you would include more detail. What are the main characters like? Can you describe their character traits? What types of things does Miss Hannigan do that aren't very nice? How is Annie creative? What is she planning? You can also add things like what you would do if you were Annie. How would your actions or thoughts be different? What do you like or dislike about the writing? Is the author descriptive? In what way? This is a good start, but you'll need to add more detail. I can't wait to hear more about your book!