Dobermans
By Emma Smith

       

    What  are those furry loving and fun animals? They are the ones who are protecting and hyper. Well here we go......

Introduction

       Dogs, more specifically dobermans, dobermans  are fun, loving, hyper, protective, and furry dogs.   Keep reading if you would like to read my little tackk about dogs but more specifically dobermans.

           What Benefits you from having a doberman

 What benefits you from having a doberman, they are loving and fun, great protection.   They do jump on you for awhile because they are excited, but don't beat them down just smack them down to where they learn but also to where it does not hurt them.   They are also a bit hyper, okay maybe more than a bit.   But they definitely make great friends and pets.  {I know because I have a mixed doberman.}

  What to expect from a doberman

 Expect dobermans to be pretty hyper.   Like I said they might and probably will jump on you at first.   Also expect dobermans to be a barker.   Also dobermans are very fun and loving and make great friends too.

How to treat dobermans

 Treat dobermans with respect.    Now though I will warn you they are very hyper but just teach them a lesson.   But please don't hurt them if they get to hyper.    Have you ever heard the saying, "Treat people the way you want to be treated". Well same goes for dobermans and any dog  for that matter, Treat dogs the way you want to be treated.

Daily dobermans   

 So you need to let your doberman out at least three~four times a day.   Make sure they get enough to eat and enough of water to drink.   If you don't trust them that much than before you go to work or before you go to school put them up.   Then you will have time to play with those fun, loving, furry animals.

Conclusion

 Overall, these sentences are just some stuff you should know about dobermans, there are probably tons more to know about dobermans.   Remember, a lot of good benefits come out of having a doberman and like I say you need to expect certain thing's from a doberman.   Also, you need to treat dobermans~ or any dog the way you want to be treated.   Last but certainly not least daily those dobermans. Maybe a doberman is not for you if not you don't have to get one, but maybe keep them in your mind.  Good luck!

Vocabulary words

Hyper~ Really excited

Specifically~ More in detail

Respect~ To show manners

Benefits~ A good cause

Protection~ Safe

Dobermans~ A type of a dog

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You need to try not to add your opinion on your first sub category

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Make sure you have 2 spaces after a sentence.

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you did a good job!Keep up the good work

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yes i liked when you talked about season (s)