Imagery For White Fang

Dark spruce forest frowned on either side the frozen waterway. The trees had been stripped by a recent wind of their white covering of frost, and they seemed to lean toward each other, black and ominous, in the fading light. A vast silence reigned over the land. The land itself was a desolation, lifeless, without movement, so lone and cold that the spirit of it was not even that of  sadness. (Chapter 1 Page 105)

Breakfast eaten and the slim camp outfit lashed to the sled, the men turned their backs on the cheery fire and launched into darkness. At once began to rise the cries that were fiercely sad--cries that called through the darkness and cold to one another and answered back. (Chapter 2 Page 112)

After searching scrutiny, the animal trotted forward a few steps. This is repeated several times, till it was a short hundred yards away. It paused, head up, close by a clump of spruce trees, and with sight and scent studied the outfit of the watching men. (chapter 2 page 119)

The day began auspiciously. They had lost no dogs during the night, they swung out upon the trail and into the silence, darkness, and the cold with spirits that were fairly light. Bill had seemed to have forgotten his forebodings of the previous night, and even waxed facetious with the dogs, when at midday, they overturned the sled o a bad piece of trail. (chapter 3 page 121)

Returning to the cave, she entered its narrow mouth. For a short three feet she was compelled to crouch, then the walls widened and rose higher in a little round chamber nearly six feet in diameter. The roof barely cleared her head. It was dry and cozy. (chapter 5 page 140-141)

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2 years ago
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I like the imagery especially with the picture of the frozen lake and the dog musher:)

2 years ago
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Yeah, that picture of the musher on the lake really makes your imagery better.

2 years ago
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👌👌

2 years ago
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👌

2 years ago
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Good job Shea, really enjoyed the imagery #beast🙉

2 years ago
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The fourth one is the best.

2 years ago
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The last picture really enhances the imagery

2 years ago
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The last picture has really good imagery

2 years ago
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good pictures