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Others thin ice

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flagstone

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seceret passage

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sizziling words- shivered, escape, creature

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Simile- she was as beautiful as Jenifer lopez

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Sensory details- she had sparkling blue eyes, light reflected off the snow and made that shine like the moon

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It was chocolaty, when the warm beverage touched his tonge and the marshmallows melted in his mouth, it tasted like heaven

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The crackling of the fire rung in their ears, it made the igloo feel like home to gregory

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Alliteration- Glad Gregory

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Onomatopoeia- CRACK!!!!!!!!!