Rump

In the beginning of my book there was one more character in the book than there is now that was rumps gran, she died closer the the beginning. The main character is Rump. The closest friend he has is Red. People make fun of Rump because of his name, the townspeople don't know his full name but i bet you do. Rump can spin straw into gold , he is short, wimpy, but he is almost thirteen years old. He goes on an magical journey to the kingdom. He spun gold and traded it to the miller and now the king has. A girl said that she spun it so now Rump had to save her and spin the gold for her. He  has to say what will you give me for the person the earn the gold now he will get her first baby. he goes to Beyond and Yonder to find his moms family. they are the wool witches now he is sleeping there but he still cannot find his whole name.

                 chapter 23, 24, and 25
                            

In the beginning of this chapter Rump woke up in the straw bed that he was in when he went to bed. His aunts are in the room that he is sleeping and he can hear what they are saying, but he cant see them. His aunts are whispering about his name that he has not told them yet. He told them a fake name. They were talking about the name rumpel but in this book that also means that someone or something gets trapped in deep magic and cannot get out. closer to the end of the chapter they went to bed and he could hear them snoring. After that he  could not sleep he stayed u the rest of the night. He woke up to his aunts talking at the dining room table. Every one of the witches has a color that covered the entire chair. there was a green one that was empty. It might have been the one that was his mother's but he was not sure if he remembered cause he did not know her.

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this is my book and I like it, it has a good storyline and lots of cliff hangers. I think that the author did a great job describing the characters. this book has a lot of chapters but they are used with great words and vocabulary. I hope that you like my tackk. this is a great book thank you for picking it out for me Mrs.Sims.

2 years ago
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Great details in your first paragraph, Samantha! It's so sad that his grandma died! At the end of the paragraph, you don't finish some of your sentences or some of them are worded oddly, and I was confused about a few things. Does Rump not know his name? Also, why did giving the girl help make him have to go back to find his mom's family? Make sure you read back over your entry out loud so that you can catch some of the errors. Also, I KNOW that you know how to use capital letters!!! Find that shift key, my friend! :)

2 years ago
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I like what you said about the cliff hangers and the great descriptions. Always make sure you give examples of those from what you've read. What's a descriptive detail that you particularly liked? What is a vocabulary word that you really liked? You're doing a great job with this--just remember to support your opinions. What do you think about Rump as a person so far? Do you like him or not?

2 years ago
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Make sure you reread your entries to check for errors before you close them out. Don't forget to add your opinion of the book and characters.