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Do you think that Grant School needs lockers? I do because all we have right now is coat hooks that don’t work very well. There needs to be lockers added to Grant School.

You might not agree with me right now but I am sure you will change your mind after reading. There needs to be lockers added to Grant school because coats and backpacks are always on the floor. If coats and backpacks are always on the floor people will trip and fall. The coats and backpacks will get dirty too. Also someone might step on it.

Another reason why Grant School needs lockers is because a lot of kids lose their things very often. If kids lose their things a lot their parents might get mad. Since kids lose their things a lot and they can’t find it, their parents would have to use their own money to buy the thing their kid lost again. Also, if kids lose their things a lot in the Winter there's a 99% they would get sick.

My last reason Grant School needs lockers is because the coat hooks are always crowded . If coat hooks are always crowded it would be harder to put your stuff on your hook. Another piece of proof is that it would be harder to get your backpack and coat. Also, since the coat hooks crowed kids stuff will always be on the floor.

You might be wondering: where we will put them, who will put them in, when will they put them in, where will we get the money to put the lockers in, and what if a kid forgot their combination? Well I know how to fix that. Mr Terry could put the lockers in during the Summer. We could put the lockers in the hallway or in a classroom that is empty. We could have a fundraiser to get the money to buy the lockers. If a kid forgot their combination they could ask their teacher because their teacher would have it wrote down.

I think that there needs to be lockers added to Grant School. It would be a great help if you could donate money to get lockers. Together we can make our school a better place.

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