White Fang

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      And White Fang hated them just as bitterly back. Being sled leader was any thing but gratifying to him. To be compelled to run away before the yelling pack, every dog of which, for three years, he had thrashed and mastered, was almost more than he could endure. But endure it he must, or perish, and the life within him had no desire to perish.(Chapter15)

He became adept at fighting. He economized. He never wasted his strength, never tussled. He was in too quickly for that, and if he missed he was out again too quickly. The dislike of the wolf for close quarters was his to an unusual degree.(chapter15)

As an enemy of his kind,it was in White Fang's province to fight with them. This he did, and he quickly achieved for them a mighty contempt. They were soft and helpless, made much noise, and floundered around clumsily, trying to accomplish by main strength what he accomplished by dexterity and cunning.(chapter15)  

For once White Fang did not make an immediate attack. he stood still ears pricked forward, alert and curious, surveying the strange animal that faced him. he had never seen such a dog before. Tim Keenan shoved the bulldog forward with a muttered "Go to it." The animal waddled toward the center of the circle, short squat and ungaingly. he came to a stop and blinked across at White Fang.(chapter18)

His whole demeanor, every action, was stamped with this purpose. It puzzled White Fang. never had he seen such a dog. It had no hair protection. It was soft, bled easily. There was no thick mat of fur to baffle White Fang's teeth, as they were often baffled by dogs of his own breed.(chapter18)

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2 years ago
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I like all of your examples and I do think that they show imagery. I also think that maybe you could`ve extended the length of some of the examples like the first one to add more imagery

2 years ago
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I liked all of your paragraphs they all showed you how White Fang was feeling. I felt like i could really see what was happening.

2 years ago
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Although the length of your examples were short I think some of them showed imagery well, though some of them could be longer, like the second paragraph.

2 years ago
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I like all your paragraphs and their imagery, but I think they could have been a little longer and showed just a little more imagery.

2 years ago
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i liked the pictures you chose. they fit really well.

2 years ago
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Your paragraphs showed imagery very well even though they were not very long. It would have been better if they were longer though.