Liam
opinion writing

Do you think that Grant school needs elevators? Well, kids can’t go to class without elevators. Also, Grant School needs elevators because some kids can’t get up the stairs.

Grant School needs elevators because some kids can’t get up the stairs. Kids who can’t walk can’t go to class. If kids can’t go to class they will miss out on learning. Also, if kids can’t walk they will have to be carried up the stairs.

Also, Grant School needs elevators because Mr. Geoff can’t get up the stairs easily because he is on crutches. If Mr. Geoff tries to go up the stairs, he might fall. If Mr. Geoff could not get up the stairs, he could not check on classes during recess. Some teachers have to make copies and someone has to watch the class, but if Mr.Geoff can’t get up the stairs then the teachers can’t make the copies.

Finally, Grant School needs elevators because the lunch bucket is hard to get up the stairs. The lunch bucket is heavy, and the lunches might fall out. Sometimes the lunches are heavy and they could break the lunch tub. Also, the lunch tub could fall on someone.

I really think we need elevators at Grant School. You can raise money for the elevators. If we raise a lot of money then we will have the elevators in no time!

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