The Call

By: Maddi Williams

Once in the fall
my mom got a call
it was very bad
my mom was very sad
she told me not to worry
i was in a hurry
once in the fall
i was scared of the call
my aunt fell off her horse
while walking up the cliff course
im happy she is fine
it happened when i was nine
once in the fall
my mom got a call

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2 years ago
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I really like this story/poem and I also like how you used repetition in it. I also like your rhyming