Peer Revising and Editing for a Short Story
by Hannah jo grace and Julie nicole johnson
underline or add transitional words, dialogue, varied dialogue tags, descriptive details and when the character changes in the story.
Then you would show a peer you're story and let them answer the following questions
What are details about the main character
What did you're peer do to help you votioalize the main characters
Do you think the characters could be real
Are there stages of plot