Mr. Kane's 11S4 English

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Summer Homework:  produce your first draft of your short story.  Click on the Imaginative writing folder below and find the document entitled "Assignment Brief" - read this carefully.  Deadline is the 7th September.

How to write a letter video....

Really good video showing you how to punctuate dialogue....

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a year ago
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Good videos but the three one l like are''Flocabuley-five thing{Element of a short story}and how to puncuate dialogue,4 easy steps an essay a writer must need to know. Because they provide good info on how to write a great story so people will like read

a year ago
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Good to hear your views Shane. And this proves that the website is working! Keep referring to the videos and other links in order to help you write a great story!

a year ago
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THIS IS THE BLOG ABOUT THE THE LETTER WRITING VIDEO: You have to write a letter TO PERSUADE. Watch the video and think also about persuasive techniques. What will make a really good letter?

a year ago
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In my letter to the film director l will need to put in DAFORST to make the letter seem more clear also to bring the film director up to speed and l will need to persuade that it will be a best seller.

a year ago
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shane deag: The AFOREST techniques will make the letter more PERSUASIVE Shane. The letter needs to convince the director to turn your story in to a film.

a year ago
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the video about letter writing was really interesting and i will try to remember the technics it talked about.

a year ago
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I enjoyed watching this video as I watched it 3 times haha, it helped me with a lot of things I wouldn't of thought to use in a formal letter and now I am able understand what they mean and why they go into the letter, thank you Mr Kane!:)

a year ago
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the video on how to write a letter was quite interesting. I have picked up on a few techniques like aforest and pall, I will try to use them in my writing.

a year ago
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This video showed me a couple of techniques. For example AFOREST and pall,I will try to use these when I am writing a letter or paragraph.

a year ago
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This video showed me a couple of techniques. For example AFOREST and pall,I will try to use these when I am writing a letter or paragraph