Freya
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Have you seen that we need new playground equipment? Well I have and I think that if we raise money for Grant school we can easily get new playground equipment! If you raise money we can get new playground equipment!

Grant needs new playground equipment because the playground equipment is getting old and rusty. If the playground equipment gets rusty and old then the playground equipment will have to be painted and fixed and also it would cost a lot of money to paint the whole intire

playground. I am just a little kid but I have notest rust and torn-off paint on the schools playground and also mostly just on the metal bars and some of the slides.

Grant school needs new playground equipment because the playground equipment is getting boring to some people and if that happens then not many people will want to play on the playground equipment and if that happens then not many people will want to play on the

playground equipment and they would just be bored and the kids would not have anything to play on or they would not want to play on the playground equipment. If kids don’t have anything fun to play on then they would have no fun at recess.

Grant school needs new playground equipment because if the playground equipment gets broken then the playground kids won’t have anything to play on and they might be thinking who will put up all the playground equipment and fix it so it isn't broken but also some teachers may think that too but who knows maybe we will find that answer some day but now we will focus more on why we need new playground equipment and hopefully we will get new playground equipment.



My first concern about the old playground equipment is that if we get new playground equipment all the kids will run to the playground equipment and not all the kids will get a turn on the new playground equipment and the kids will have a big fight about the new playground equipment.You might not care but I do because I think it is not fair if everyone fights about playground equipment and also feelings might get hurt.

I really think we need new playground equipment! If you see rust on the playground equipment can you tell an adult or a playground supervisor? We can work together to keep the playground nice.

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