i think you have some good ideas here, Michael. You are right, both Greg and Juenio are connected to their communities. In your body paragraphs you will give specific examples of that.
Lets try to get more specific. What is Junior's lifeboat? What does he do when he feels upset? Does Greg have a form of artistic expression? Both want to know who they are and where they come from. See if you can put these ideas into a thesis statement.