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2 years ago
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Anna Scafidi
1/9/2015
Language Arts
P5th The sacred fudge
On a hot summer day I as enjoying an Orange Ice Popsicle. It looked like an orange Ice beverage. Since it was really hot I decided to head into the ocean. It was a desert ocean because people don’t usually come into this area. I swam around for a little bit in the mandarin orange colored orange when I found a Japanese Koi fish. It was unusual because I was already living in Hawaii and the fish were supposed to be living in Japan. Suddenly a koi fish started to jump around like a dog trying to get attention. It looked like it was trying to tell me to go underwater so I did.
It was a crystal blue water. It sounded like bubbles around me. The koi fish was talking to me and it said, “You have to come and help my tribe and somebody stole the sacred fudge.” Then I followed him to his tribe the koi fish. I went to the koi fish queen and I told her I can help with the sacred fudge disappearance. So eventually she gave me a map of the mid-ocean ridge. It took me to the tribe of the Great White shark. It was a brief trip to the tribe. When she broke into the shark cave the door went POW! The room had soaked carpets and couches with no pillows and in the center of the room their stood the sacred fudge.
The only problem was the cave was invested by sharks. I jumped over the fist shark and the shark went sailing into a wall. The last two sharks had me cornered swimming as fast as the could toward me. Then I forgot that I was in water so I swam up. All of the sharks were unconscious so I took the sacred fudge. I went back to the koi fish tribe and I returned the sacred fudge to the queen. Right when I put the sacred fudge back to the koi fish two of the koi fish came in and attacked me for the fudge. I fought them both off. Then I realized how much trouble the sacred fudge caused. The sacred fudge had already done enough so I ate the sacred fudge. The fudge tasted magnificent.



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Paint chips:fudge,mandran orange, orange ice, Japanese

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onoamonapia:POW

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aliteation:trip to the tribe

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sizzleimg words: beverage, brief, sacred

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imergy: it was crystals blue

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the room had soaked carpets and couches

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with no pillows

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I swam around a bit in the mandran Orange water