By:Cynthia Rylant                       Donovin Thompson
                                Core 2

"What about this pretty red haired girl, that wears a bow?" She is this girl that came to the boy's register to check out and they caught eye contact,it was his first day at the job he was already nervous. When they caught eye contact the boy dropped the jar of mayonnaise. When it was her turn to checkout they fell in love that moment. Well see there's a problem though the boy is afraid to talk to her. He wishes he had "another chance to be confident and say witty things to her as he threw tin cans into her bags." In the end they will meet again in the story. I think this story was interesting because when I began to read I started to get interested to keep reading and find out what will happen.

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