End of Year Project

Camille Garcia 4th period

Scholarship Persuasive Essay

In today's society there is a lot of bad people and few good ones. Imagine what the world would look like if there were no criminals or people with bad intentions. The world needs good people to be able to insure safety and to continue to function as a equal society.

As most people already know criminals are everywhere. If everyone was good less crimes would happen such as less people's lives being taken away or bad things happening to innocent people like robberies. For example, there is approximately 10,450,000 criminals in the world. If every criminal was made good, people wouldn't have to worry about going out late at night or even locking there houses before they leave. Therefore, the world would live with peace and tranquility.

In addition to crimes being a major issue in the world due to bad people, there is also a numerous amount of people living in horrible conditions and where everyone's life is in control of one person. Countries such as North Korea live in society where they're forced into doing things and were they're practically brainwashed into thinking all these lies by a leader. People like the leader of North Korea are not good people. Leaders just like the one from North Korea take advantage of innocent people that don't deserve to live a life so horrid.

On the contrary, if the world was surrounded by bad people everything would be chaotic. Everyone would live in fear of getting hurt. Even so some bad people people would be worse than others it would still be a world filled with fear and sadness.

With a world with more good people, we can weed out the evil and help fill the world with peace, harmony, tranquility, and happiness. The help of good people can take away the idea of criminals and crime and begin to function like a equal society. The thought of goodness or a kind gesture from a person can help us work together to make this earth a peaceful and safe home for everyone.

Letter of Recommendation

To whom it may concern,

I am a friend of Anahi Lagarda and have known Anahi for several years.  Me and Anahi have been in the same school since fifth grade and the same cheerleading team as well, since 8th grade to current day. Since I have been with Anahi  in school and teams for several years now I feel that I am qualified enough to tell you about all the great things Anahi has to offer.

Anahi is a excellent student as well as a great asset to the Cheerleading team. She is a great teammate. Anahi is very respectful towards all of her teachers and coaches. Anahi posses the skills of what a great leader would contain. She is organized, determined,and hard working. Anahi makes sure to give 110% toward everything she does and always goes above and beyond the standards.

Anahi would like to pursue the career of a pediatrician and I think she is just right for the job! Anahi is caring and  responsible just as she  should be if she were a pediatrician. She is currently taking AP biology and AP algebra. She is a excellent leader and will be if given the opportunity.

I highly recommend Anahi Lagarda for the position as a pediatrician. She will be a great asset to the medical field. I guarantee you will not regret choosing Anahi for the position!

If you have any more concerns or questions please do not hesitate to call me at (123)456-7890 or email me at bluewhite54@icloud.com.


Camille Garcia

Cover Letter / Letter of Intent


                    614 Oak Woods dr.

                 El Paso, Texas 79938

May 18, 2015

Miguel Trevizo

English Educator

14400 Pebble Hills Blvd.

El Paso, 79938

Dear Miguel Trevizo:

I am a hardworking student. I am a good public speaker, good at writing and reading. I can fluently read, write, and speak English and Spanish. I am organized and could work as an individual or independent. Many of my qualities are those of a leader.

I would be a great asset to the medical field as an obstetrician and gynecologist. My qualifications include taking AP biology, AP algebra, AP English, and AP world geography as well as, other AP courses. I have worked as a babysitter before in which my responsibilities were to take care of the children as I would when I am an obstetrician and gynecologist.

I would love to pursue my career as an obstetrician and gynecologist.


Camille Garcia


Camille Garcia


614 Oak woods dr.




To obtain a position in the medical field as a obstetrician and gynecologist.


Elementary: 2005-2010 Paso Del Norte, 2011 Sgt. Roberto Ituarte Elementary

Middle school: 2012-2014 Spc. Rafael Hernando III

High school: 2015 El Dorado 9th grade academy


Terrific Kid (1st-5th grade)

1st place science fair (1st grade)

Math whiz kid (5th grade)

A/B honor roll (6-7th grade)

A honor roll (8th grade)


Babysitting (whenever needed)


-feed children

-watch over the children

-take care of the children


-science and math skills

-communication skills

-listening skills

-leadership skills

-organization skills

-caring and nurturing skills

Job Application