MAY 27, 2014

Dear Ms. Sara,                                                                                                       May 27, 2014

I'm reading Nancy Drew and The Secret of the Old Clock. Nancy and two of her friends went to a singing lessons to go see if the man likes the voice of Alison , a friend of Nancy.

      The character that I don't like is Crouly Thopham , because he has got all the money of  Alisons parants when they died.

      If I was Alison I would go to the Thopham house to say that it is not there money,

because it is there money but not of the Thopham's.

If I was the auther I would change the tittle.