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I agree with being loyal your family because your family is the first  people you meet. You  family no matter where you go in life your family should always be there for you. For example when your younger, you may have many disagreements with your parents about what you do, where you go and how you it but when you get older you understand why your parents told you what they did because they care and your parents are gonna try not to tell you anything wrong unless there bad parents.

I agree with our lives being fated to play out in certain ways because I think things happen for a reason. For example when you meet your friends or significant other I believe that if you would of done one thing different then you wouldn't of met that person. Even though I believe in fate I also believe that you have control over your fate just like in my example above if you do one thing different in your life or make a different decision then what you were intended to do then your life path will be totally altered. I read a quote on Mrs. Whitcraft's wall that said "You have to be willing to give up the life you planned for the life that was intended for you to have". I don't think that was how the quote went exactly but it matches my point.

I agree that people should being punished for breaking the law because if one bad thing goes in punished then it could lead to even worse things. For example if a person gets caught shoplifting and doesn't go unpunished then that event could lead even more shop lifting and eventually robbing a bank or something else. I don't strongly agree because there are some rules that could go with out being punished like teens being late for city curfew because coming home late couldn't lead to anything more except if the teen is drinking or doing drugs.

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2 years ago
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Alexa, good specific example in paragraph 3 - paragraph 1 should have one as well. The quote on my wall is an interesting one...sometimes we have so many plans that we miss what is in front of us.

2 years ago
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Read your work and proofread carefully. You've got a number of writing problems; see me if you'd like to go through it together.