narrative entry 2
"Help Isn't Coming
that was deep i truly believe my group did fantastically it definately helps that my group consisted of my 2 best friends my most trusted people and i think that really helped us open up our scene beyond our comfort zones we were just so on the same page the whole way through the planning and the practicing and the connections back to the viewpoints. i believe that we used both architecture and repetition very well speaking in particular about my line its been a pleasure sir along with Sara's its all your fault i felt that part was very powerful and it was able to express Sara's motives (to blame dirk) as well as mine (to be loyal) and at the same time show case dirk. i obviously didn't get to see it from the audience side but the intention was to use our bodies as architecture kind of to frame Dirk and by contrasting our shapes we were able to convey deeper Sara is done just dosn't care and i stayed at attention the whole time. okay so now reflection on others WOW i have had more nightmares about Dan Kamb then usual after the cannibalism performance i remember being scared of Dan but as i think back on it i cant even remember Dan i remember the music and Nina's deep intense soulless stare. while thinking about it right now the hairs on the back of my neck are literally standing up Nina's end pose was so terrifying and her eyes were viciously digging at my soul with a small fork. Claire wins best death of the era award that neck snap was wonderful and finally Allegra oh my mentally shot Allegra she somehow managed to remove every semblance of a soul from her being.
the bully scene Pat's character was perfect he was just so real it was a little scary. Maddie's charactor was zarking rude i could not stand her she was arrogant a matter of fact you know how arrogant she was aloof, bossy, cavalier, cocky, haughty, imperious, pompous, presumptuous, pretentious, smug, vain, assuming, audacious, autocratic, biggety, bragging, cheeky, conceited, contemptuous, disdainful, domineering, egotistic, high and mighty, high-handed, insolent, know-it-all, on an ego trip, overbearing, peremptory, proud, puffed up, scornful, self-important, snippy, snooty, snotty, stuck up, supercilious, and uppity
that is every synonym for arrogant according to the Merriam Webster dictionary/ thesaurus minus cool and swaggering i have no idea why those were in there i deleted them.
OK first group the atrium there use of spacial relationship and architecture was phenomenal they framed each moment like it was a movie screen and they used the viewpoint of pain to the fullest extent possible in there pregnant woman suicide :'( as well as the viewpoint of irony in that the imprisoned mothers were in all black and the warden was dressed in white which are colors that usually represent their opposites.