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The three statements that I agree with is everyone should follow the law, our lives are fated to play out in certain ways, and being loyal to your family is important because I think those laws are reasonable or important.

I agree on everyone should follow the law because it is important That we should followed. Like no texting while driving and no driving while drunk, no one follow these law because it's not important to them to follow it. And it causing car crushing and sometime, it causes people to get hurt. I think follow laws is good for people owns health and life because then it won't caused problems. I didn't strongly agree with these because I think some law we shouldn't follows, like you should not cross the red light but sometime people cross the red light because it's due to a emenegry and they need to get to the hospital.  

I strongly agree on our lives are fated to play out in certain ways because we all born to live and die at an old aged. Our lives are fated when our mother gives birth to us, at that moment our lives is already decided. We born to a baby and each day we grow and grow to little kid then into teenage after that we aged and die. No one can escape this fate because it already decided which we all cannot changed. Also, no one knows what will happens to them tomorrow or what will happens to them in every second, minute, or hour because we only knows the present not what is ahead of us.

I agree on being loyal to your family is important because my mom and dad give birth to me and they give me the energy to work hard and do my best at the thing I'm doing. They protected me whenever I'm in trouble and they always stand up for me and be there for me. Like a bird protected her child when the child is in trouble. I didn't strongly agree with these because most of people family isn't good as yours and they don't have the supports as you do. So some people don't strongly agree being loyal to your family is important because those people family always have probmels, bad relationship and they don't have someone to take responsibility of them.

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2 years ago
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Youa, beautiful job! You use specific examples and your paragraphs flow together well.