This is a good summary, J. It could even be a little shorter and still be complete. If you feel like writing what a character is saying, then it probably means you are adding too much detail. What did you think about the way the author wrote about the rhino cage? I felt like he was keeping us in suspense FOREVER! He kept giving clues about what the animal would be, but none of them were clear enough until he finally revealed that it was a rhino! What do you think about Noah and Richie and Ella so far? You forgot to add your opinion of the characters or events this time. Do you think the key is actually a trap for the kids or do you think someone is really trying to help them find Megan?