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Zuri has just started school, and she hates her teacher mrs. Falkenberg. The next day Jessie puts the kids on the bus to go to school meanwhile Zuri escapes out of the bus so no body could see her. So she quickly runs to the dumbwaiter and gets her dolls and starts playing. Jessie walks in and sits at the table and heres a peculiar voice coming from the dumb waiter,so Jessie opens it and catches Zuri playing with her dolls. Jessie says what are you doing out of school, Zuri says our teacher Mrs. Falkenberg is so mean. So Jessie just lets her stay home because she didn't feel like arguing. Soon Jessie says well tomorrow I start volunteering to be your class aid, and i will see whats going on for my self. So the next day Jessie walks in to the class room and introduces her self and the class began. When they got home Jessie also agreed on that she is very mean. Thats all i have gotten so far

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2 years ago
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jessie is introducing her self to the class

2 years ago
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i have gotten farther and got to the next story, so, Ravi has a giant lizard as a pet and they love each other butt one day the lizard was being very mean to ravi, and he didn't know why. The lizard has gotten on his nerves so Ravi hatched an idea. The idea was to move in with his brother. So he packs his luggage and knocks on Lukes room and says hello roomie, Luke was very confused so Ravi explained what happened. If you want to see what happens next read Jessie, i am telling you its a great book.

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2 years ago
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there roomies

2 years ago
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i mean their

2 years ago
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You mean "they're." :) They are roomies. :)

2 years ago
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Hailey, you didn't mention the title of your book. This is a good summary of the events. I can tell exactly what is happening and why, but you haven't added what you think of Zuri and Jessie's situation. What do you think of Jessie's choice in letting Zuri stay home from school? What do you think of her going to class with Zuri? What do you think of Zuri's teacher? Is she really mean or is Zuri being too sensitive? Make sure you always add your opinion of what is going on in the book and support it with proof from the book. For example, if you say that you think the teacher is mean, give an example of what she did or said that proves she is mean. Also, make sure you are reading your response out loud so that you can tell where your sentences should end. You have some run-ons in these entries. Try to fix those. Let me know if you need some help.

2 years ago
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Your second entry doesn't reflect that very much has happened. How was the lizard being mean? What happened after Ravi moved in? How did Luke feel about him moving in? What do you think about his decision to move in with his brother? Make sure that you reread your entry carefully. You have some errors in here that you could easily avoid by rereading and checking for capital letters and ending punctuation.