Jeriah
opinion writing

Grant School needs more playground equipment. Do you think Grant School needs more playground equipment? The current playground equipment is old and rusty.

Our school needs more playground equipment because the other playground equipment is getting old. If the playground equipment breaks there will be nothing to play on. Another reason is that there would be no point of going outside. Also Grant School needs more playground equipment because nobody will want to play on the equipment that is already set up. Why nobody will want to play on the equipment that is already set up is because it would be boring.

We should get new playground equipment because the old equipment is starting to break. One reason is that if the equipment breaks and somebody is on the equipment that is going to break they can get badly hurt. Another reason is that if the equipment breaks there will be nothing to play on.

This is the proof why Grant School needs new playground equipment. And if we don’t get new playground equipment it will be really boring. If Grant School gets new playground equipment it will be really fun at recess!

You might be wondering how are we going to get the money to

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