Alvin
Opinion Writing

Did you know that some classes have too many students? Grant School needs more classrooms because we can’t have a class with a lot of students. Grant School needs more classrooms.
Grant school needs more classrooms because some classrooms have too many students. If a classroom has too many students it will get crowed. For example, Miss Schwarting’s class has 29 students and it’s hard to fit all of the desks in. Also, if every class had 29 students the school would be full.
Another reason Grant School needs more classrooms is because a lot of classrooms get really loud. If a class gets loud it will interrupt other classrooms. Also, if every classroom was loud then the whole school would be loud and students wouldn’t be able to focus. If we had more classrooms, it wouldn’t be so loud. Finally, the last reason Grant School needs more classrooms is because teachers and students can’t even think when it’s too loud. If a student is thinking about what to write, and the class is too loud then they can’t think about writing. For example, Miss Schwarting is thinking about important things and if her class is too loud then she can’t focus on what shes thinking about. If one classroom is thinking and others are being distracting that whole class loses focus.
You might be thinking “Who's going to clean them and build them?” Well, the class or janitor could clean them. Students and teachers can help with building the classrooms, too.

Grant School needs more classrooms. together we can plan a fundraiser. We can make Grant School a bigger place.

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