You have some really important ideas in your summary, but you are also missing some key ones that would help a reader understand what Charlie Joe is facing. Did he get some bad grades on his report card? I can't imagine that his parents are forcing him to get straight A's. Why did he have to be painted as a fox hunter? That does seem like it would be embarrassing. What do you think of Charlie Joe? What do you think of his choices? He has had to rely on his friends before. Are they still interested in helping him? What do you think of the book so far? Would you recommend it? Also, check the title in your response. I think you meant Guide to Extra Credit. :) Watch capitalization and check for complete sentences.